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Normalizing…in Pleasantville

April 5, 2019, I opened my production of the 2009 Tony Award and Pulitzer Prize winning musical Next to Normal with book and lyrics by Brian Yorkey and music by Tom Kitt. I was beyond proud of my mostly agricultural MidWestern community for promoting, producing, performing, attending and supporting this groundbreaking and difficult step forward in their main stage subscriber season.

2010 Census Statistics for the county of the production*Population: 100,000; 45,000 households/30,000 families; Racial makeup: 93.2% White, Latino, 8.0%, 1.9% Black or African American, 0.7% Asian, 0.3% American Indian, 2.5% from other races, and 1.4% from two or more races; Median age: 41.0; Median household income: $52,000 ; Population below the poverty line: 10.8%; Largest industries: Manufacturing (7,000), Health Care & Social Assistance (7000), Retail Trade (7000); Highest paying industries: Utilities ($95,000), Mining, Quarrying, & Oil & Gas Extraction ($63,000), Public Administration ($57,000); Political lean: Republican; High school or higher: 89%; Bachelor’s degree or higher: 18%; Religious: 61%; Catholic: 41%; Christian, other:. 22%; Jewish: 0.11%; Islam: 0.00%

*numbers are rounded to leave the county anonymous

As I was (edit TPT 7/18/21) a member of an area summer stock’s season think-tank and the writer of this blog, I am deliberately educated in new works, and was already enamored of Next to Normal. The theatre where I directed the show sponsors a “Director’s Workshop” in January of the year before it’s January-December season. A director must submit an application, and elect a predetermined time slot in which to produce the show. The board reads/audits and votes for submissions. Winning submissions are welcomed in Winter, Spring, Summer, off-season, and Fall. Imagine my thrill when the new voices on the selection committee offered this choice in a stack of “shows they’d like to see at our theatre!” Despite in-script approved language substitutions, I agreed to do the show only if using all the original dialogue and lyrics. I was not going to repeat a previous mandate from the same theatre to make substitutions. I believe the result was something of which I and our production team, actors, theatre, and our patrons and community should be proud. What follows is a review of that success, production challenges, and “wish-I-wouldas” from my contemplation of the show after its closing. 

My direction: A director at this theatre gets approximately 9 weeks to mount a show. You are practically building and directing the show on the same stage simultaneously.   I believe an environment was created in which actors, and technical staff felt empowered to be part of the creative work and honored each other‘s decisions. Critically, it would’ve been best for me to take more time before rehearsals began to create blocking. I have become very accustomed to an improvisational directing style with a three-day (approximately 7 hours) rehearsal week. The show demanded more dictated decisions supported by pre-planning, for which I had not prepared. Choreography should have been created before the first rehearsal by a choreographer who was on the production team months earlier. That choice would have given me more time to spend on acting, my forte. I had four rehearsals per week and could have used more. I would, in the future, probably only attend 2 to 3 per week, and let the choreographer and/or music director do their job while I used the night for family or for planning for my blocking and acting rehearsals. My actors did a fine job, but they would have benefited from more intensive work. Diana, especially and others had to create far too much of their own stage business. Summoning my internal Ivo van Hove, I controversially added an ensemble, 4 actresses dressed in scrubs who made the scene changes move quickly and seamlessly.. They acted as invisible commentators and metaphorical puppeteers, and most often added to the involvement of our audience in the action.I wish I had given them more to do in Act 2. You may remind me that the show won awards without them. 

Casting: We were stretched at auditions by a production of Mamma Mia casting at the same time. As always, we were short on MALES, MALES, MALES. I seriously wanted to have a more diverse cast (mixed race family, non-white Henry, Doctor), but turnout and area demographics won out again to the overwhelming whiteness of our area. During my rehearsal process, I was hampered by the loss of two ensemble members, who left the production for personal emotional health reasons, and the recurring health concerns of another. This made some of the choral work (and direction) more difficult to manufacture and I had to make some changes, even near opening. I had a marvelous cast. They bonded and often made up for my occasional lack of planning and vision. My Dan was a former professional dancer who saved my unplanned heiny. We brought several new voices and talent to our theatre who were inspired to continue their association with other area theatres. 

Music: I could never have had a better musical director! Development of the choral work was inspired. All I needed to do was say, “…and the ensemble sings here.“ At this point, she created the vocal parts. DO NOT do this show without a separate music director who works in collaboration with the primary director. Vocally, this show must be mic’d. The vocal dynamics are too demanding for non-professionals with demanding day-jobs to safely attempt without them. Due to the ever-present difficulty and labor of finding volunteer musicians, I made the decision to go with an excellent pre-recorded score by ROCS. The show would have been richer with a live band. We have no pit, so I would have put them in full view somewhere. As a result, my music director ran the score with one hand while conducting with a small flashlight in the other!

Lights: For the most part the decisions (colors, fades, intensity) for lighting were mine based on instruments hung by a technician who is ahead of me in understanding the board. I know what I like, but I’m not skilled enough to achieve it., The second level was constantly underlit, and used too few instruments. The stairs should’ve had at least two more lighting instruments alone since there was so much action on them. Unfortunately,  my operator’s health made it impossible for us to develop the design fully.

Set: We had a horrendous time getting a set design and could get no crew to assist us. This is not anybody’s fault but it was highly unfortunate. I ended up designing the set myself. The paneled rustic modern cross section of a home was gloriously executed by a community member in the skilled trades. The “paneling” was his interpretation of a fleeting idea of mine, and the slider doors were all his. He even encouraged me to use more color upstage and underneath. The pipe and board stair rail was his, as was the rolling crate/table. I wish that we would have built the consoles and the benches for the second level to make them more integrated into the set. Stylized windows and an arch from the original design were omitted for time constraints but would have seriously reinforced the “house“ design. It would’ve been nice to create a way to “fly“ the roofline in and out because it blocked lights. I had many, many compliments on the ease of having characters appear and scene changes occur because of these barn doors. An upstage “mountain mural” was a late thought. I wish the clouds had been painted more realistically and the entire work executed in only shades of brown. It would’ve been nice to hang black curtains in such a way that we had a larger mural. The stairs that were exposed to the audience upstage center were functional. However, I wanted to achieve floating stairs for a more high-style architectural design. 

Sound: We had to bring in several monitors and it was barely enough. From an audience perspective, it really sounded like the singing was coming directly from the stage and allowed a great deal of subtlety and range for the actors. I’m glad that we chose to mic everyone. Again, I wish I had been brave enough and worked early enough to have a live band. 

Costumes: As with many community theatres mounting contemporary shows, most items were pulled from the actor’s own closets. I wish we had taken more time. It worked, but we needed more details for Natalie, and Gabe. This would have been helpful for the audience to understand more about their characters.

Production team: My producers were responsive, supportive and involved. Because there are so few producers who work with our theatre, they were involved with other shows and weren’t available to me as early as I would’ve liked. An ensemble member was fabulous at doing double duty. Many directors love to have their hands in all the pies. I would rather have people with creative opinions and experience that only require me to say yes and no and “great, but more purple.“ 

Production facilities: The theatre in which it was produced is a dream for a company like ours when it comes to her physical plant. I learned far too late how versatile the second floor was for rehearsals. I had never realized it was so large and fitting for blocking rehearsals. The theatreConverted two-screen movie theater; Classic proscenium; Playing space approximately 30” deep, 100: wide; Stage right: a corridor Stage left deck is ¾ the size of the playing space; 166 seats; Sound and lights: fairly modern; Pit: none; Greenroom; 2 moderate community dressing rooms; Storage for costumes, props and stock set pieces; 2nd floor: storage, makeup tables, rehearsal space, offices, lighting booth; Lobby with seating and a refreshments bar; On-street and rear parking; Located in an active business district with stores, restaurants, and bars

Board support: As I have mentioned before, I am very proud of our area community theatre for putting this in their main season. It was a bold step. Some improvements: I asked a couple of email questions of board members. They were group emails, and both went unanswered. Perhaps because they were group emails, possibly because some people may not have have my email address in their contacts so the messages never got to him and went straight to junk. Perhaps, I didn’t follow the correct protocol. 

Concert Show: My emails were about, and I would still like to consider, “concert productions“ of this work if we could still get the cast together. This is probably  moot point one year later. I suggested that we appeal to surrounding theaters and ask them to pay royalties, and provide sound and lights. They would collect the ticket sales themselves to offset costs. I would have  liked to offer a premium per performance to actors, and musicians if we need them. Music would be a problem. The show needs at least a piano, guitar, and a drummer, or one would need to pay for the digitized music again. This would add far more expense to the “concert venues“ and may make this too expensive for other theaters to undertake for one night performances. I still believe investigation of the concept is worthwhile even if it is never successful for Next to Normal

In summation, thank you to the universe for this absolutely wonderful opportunity to work on a beautiful piece. Hopefully, it has emboldened theatre community and new and young directors, brought new people to the theater who have never been there before, and given our community something they can sink their teeth into and be inspired.

THESE SHINING LIVES by Melanie Marnich: an analysis for production

Part of the series, “..by Nancy…”

CATHERINE: I want to know what it feels like to make eight dollars a week. I want to know. Just once. I want to be that person. For a while. p.13

TPT Commentary: The humor and sweetness of Marnich’s early dialogue slowly set the audience up for a sucker punch. The patron will assume that they are getting a nostalgic memory play about women entering the workforce. They will fall in love with Catherine, laugh with Charlotte, and be charmed by Tom. Soon after, that dream will be silently and slowly stolen and replaced with a hard reality still being played out in worldwide manufacturing: Must I give my life to raise my family? The show is deceptively simple but requires a brisk pace, an excellent ensemble cast, and evocative costumes, makeup, and hair hopefully elevated by creative lighting and projections.

Recommendation: STRONG

Summary: “Catherine and her friends are dying, it’s true; but theirs is a story of survival in its most transcendent sense, as they refuse to allow the company that stole their health to kill their spirits—or endanger the lives of those who come after them.” 

A young woman joins the workforce to support her family finding identity, pride, and friendship only to discover that that the work is killing her and and her coworkers. TPT

Premiere:  April 30, 2008,  Center Stage, Baltimore

Themes: corporate greed, women’s rights/liberation, women’s work/pay, occupational health conditions, worker’s rights, friendship, marriage, gender norms

Cast: 4 women/ 2 men: It is worth noting that Dramatist Play Service, I assume by its standard format, lists the number of male roles first,  followed by the number of women’s roles. This is clearly a play led by and about women. Perhaps a revision of the standard format is in order.

Running Time: 1 hour, 20 minutes; there is no indication of an intermission. The play is referred to as “a play in one act by Melanie Marnich,” though DPS indicates “Full Length, Comedy/Drama.” There are several scene breaks, if your theater insists on an intermission, and there is no author’s note prohibiting one. 

Royalties (professional):$120 per performance

Rights: apply here

Sets: A single flexible set indicating several locations, and screens for suggested projections

Costumes:. Period men’s and women’s costumes (1920’s), approximately 17. Some may be suggested (lab coat/suit jacket/trench coat over base costume). Many must have phosphorescent treatments. Phosphorescent makeup details.

 Props: chairs, tables, clock faces of multiple sizes, paint brushes: nothing difficult to find or necessary to build

Provenance:   

Playwright:  Melanie Marnich is a Golden Globe-winning writer and an internationally produced, award-winning playwright. Her episode for Big Love, “Come, Ye Saints,” earned her a Writers’ Guild nomination and was named Best Television Episode of 2009 by Entertainment Weekly, rated third in TIME Magazine’s list of 10 Best Episodes of 2009, and ranked in TV Guide’s Best TV Episodes of All Time. Her plays have premiered at The Kennedy Center, Steppenwolf Theatre Company, Manhattan Theatre Club, Baltimore Center Stage and The Actors Theatre of Louisville’s Humana Festival. She also serves on the Board of Trustees for the Humanitas Foundation.

– IMDb Mini Biography By: Melanie Marnich 

Purchase: $10 

Reviews:  

Baltimore, MD, 2008 

London, 2013: 

Chicago, 2018: 

Chicago, 2009:

Boston area, 2013: 

Latham, NY, 2013: 

San Francisco/North Bay, 2019

Drinking: gin from a flask

Smoking: suggestions in dialogue

Sex: implied offstage after a scene between a married man and woman

 Language: nothing questionable 

Violence: none

Other possibly controversial subject matter: cancer, death

Rating: G, with serious themes

Format inspired by the sadly suspended operations of the Arkansas Repertory Theatre (then enhanced by TPT)  

A Shayna Maidel by Barbara Lebow: An analysis for production

Luisa (reading Mama’s letter): If I could really be with you and put around you mine arms, it would be much better, but that is impossible. It cannot be. If I cannot hold you in mine arms, I hold you anyway in mine heart and this is true for every day in your life since you was born, if you was in Chernov, Poland or Brooklyn, New York, America.

A Shayna Maidel, set in 1946 Brooklyn, NY, (yes, NYC, so shoot me) explores the relationship between two sisters separated by the Holocaust. Rose Weiss, the epitome of the title which translates to “a pretty girl” from the Yiddish, emigrated as a child, and was spared the well-recorded daily horrors and decades of separation and loss suffered by her now-found older sister Luisa. After a surreal flashback to war-torn Poland, this 20-something assimilated liberated and gainfully employed young American woman with her own one bedroom, 3-room apartment and a closet full of pretty dresses answers a late night call (on Shabbas no less!) and reluctantly welcomes an unremembered sister with none of the above. The result is a study in identity and assimilation, privation and privilege with Barbara Lebow reminding us that good fortune is often not a matter of choice, but of chance.

At minimum, A Shayna Maidel allows its audience members to reflect on “those who went before us.” With the convenient metaphorical distance of period setting, the greater and more immediate context of refugees who are “white like us” emerges. According to the Global Rich List http://www.globalrichlist.com/, a website that brings awareness to worldwide income disparities, an income of $32,400 a year places one well within the top 1% of income worldwide. Currently with my income alone (not calculating for dependents and not including my wife’s income), The Global Rich List income calculator places me in the top 0.23% of the richest people in the world, the 13,754,109th richest person on earth! Most of those Americans reading this analysis have been blessed with opportunities; Many with multi-generational land ownership. All still yet with an education that, at minimum,  allows them to read. Most of my readers have never known poverty. Few have witnessed and feared genocide aimed at their own ethnicity. Yet there are those of us, perhaps within your family’s recent history, and definitely those with families abroad, who have not been as fortunate. We are now witnessing the highest levels of displacement on record. 65.6 million people around the world have been forced from their homes. Among them are nearly 22.5 million refugees, over half of whom are under the age of 18, www.unhcr.org/en-us/figures-at-a-glance.html. Circumstance has been our benefactor. Are we ready to share out good fortune?

Recommendation: STRONG

Cast: 4w/2m (with doubling, 4 characters are portrayed in shadow and low light)

Regional dialects: NY Polish Jew, Yiddish written phonetically and translated in an appendix

Characters 20s-late 60s,

Running time:  approx 2:30 (https://dctheatrescene.com/2007/10/17/a-shayna-maidel/)

Royalties (professional): $80 per performance

Running Time: Two hours and 30 minutes, with an intermission

Sets: Single interior, attractive but modest pre-war one bedroom Brooklyn apartment with one scrimmed wall revealing a bedroom. Lighting changes are the only indication of a change in place to and from Poland years before

Costumes: Approximately 14; periods: 1946 NYC well-dressed businessman and young woman, peasant clothing earlier

Props: conventional, period, especially exposed kitchen, dining area and living room

Controversial topics: immigration, privilege, Holocaust

Purchase: ISBN 9780822210191:http://www.samuelfrench.com/p/12910/a-shayna-maidel (not in stock 1/20/2018), http://www.dramatists.com/cgi-bin/db/single.asp?key=1091

Several buying options: https://www.amazon.com/gp/offer-listing/B00GUGUCW4/ref=dp_olp_all_mbc?ie=UTF8&condition=all

Suitable for: community theatre, summer stock, regional theatre, small theatre

Awards

Lead Actress: Melissa Gilbert (Rose Weiss): 1988 Outer Critics Circle Award, Best Debut Performance, 1988 Theatre World Award

Original production (NYC) review:

http://www.nytimes.com/1987/10/30/theater/the-theater-a-shayna-maidel.html

Recent production reviews:

2011, Pittsburgh: https://www.pghcitypaper.com/pittsburgh/a-shayna-maidel/Content?oid=1459048

2007, Washington DC: https://dctheatrescene.com/2007/10/17/a-shayna-maidel/

2002, Chicago: https://www.chicagoreader.com/chicago/a-shayna-maidel/Content?oid=909887

2010: Long Beach: https://www.backstage.com/review/la-theater/a-shayna-maidel/

2012, Coral Springs, FL: https://www.backstage.com/review/la-theater/a-shayna-maidel/

 

Crimes of the Heart by Beth Henley: An Analysis for Production

Chick Boyle: So Rebecca, what are you going to tell Mr. Lloyd about shooting Zachery, uh, what are your reasons gonna be?

Rebeca ‘Babe’: That I didn’t like his looks. That I didn’t like his stinkin’ looks! I don’t like yours either Chickie stick. So leave me alone and I mean it. Just leave me alone!

“At the end of 1980, Crimes of the Heart was produced off-Broadway at the Manhattan Theatre Club for a limited, sold-out, engagement of thirty-two performances. By the time the play transferred to Broadway in November, 1981, Crimes of the Heart had received the prestigious Pulitzer Prize. Henley was the first woman to win the Pulitzer for Drama in twenty-three years, and her play was the first ever to win before opening on Broadway. Crimes of the Heart went on to garner the New York Drama Critics Circle Award for Best New American Play, a Guggenheim Award, and a Tony nomination. The tremendously successful Broadway production ran for 535 performances, spawning regional productions in London, Chicago, Washington, Atlanta, Los Angeles, Dallas, and Houston. The success of the play—and especially the prestige of the Pulitzer award—assured Henley’s place among the elite of the American theatre for years to come. As Henley herself put it, with typically wry humor, “winning the Pulitzer Prize means I’ll never have to work in a dog-food factory again” (Haller 44).” http://www.encyclopedia.com/arts/educational-magazines/crimes-heart#A

This dark comedy set in the still small town of Hazlehurst, Mississippi (pop. reported in 2016 as 3,883), may well be the archetype by which all plays in this series will earn my recommendation. Crimes of the Heart is well-written, hilarious, character-driven within realistic circumstances, and portrays women as combatants in the war of life, not victims. It happens to have been written by a woman. Especially, for those of you who have read my peculiarities  IT’S NOT SET IN NYC!

It is no surprise that Crimes of the Heart remains a staple in the seasons of many theatres, even though I haven’t ever seen it here in Pleasantville. I checked the production history of our longest running community theatre and despite it being a community theatre’s wet dream (comedy, strong central roles for women, 1 interior set, inexpensive props and costumes), it has never been produced in the 50-year history of the theatre. Perhaps, early on, there were some moral concerns (murder, interracial affair with a teenager, ridiculously failed attempts at suicide)  but most all tawdriness is offstage and the story is done with so much humor, I cannot see how nearly anyone, outside of a Puritan complete with stovepipe hat, would have been, or would ever be offended. This should be produced in every season until the end of time replacing any considered future production of the The Marvelous Swim Club of Church Basement Nuns.

Recommendation: STRONG: YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!

Cast: 4w/2m, regional accents, all characters 19-32, Doc walks with a slight limp. Casting notice: https://www.backstage.com/casting/crimes-of-the-heart-4555/

Royalties (professional): $100 per performance

Running Time: Two hours, with an intermission

Costumes: approximately 13 including conservative practical dresses circa 1974 or earlier. 2 men’s costumes: 1 casual, 2 costumes for an attorney (season: fall Mississippi)

Set: single interior: 1974, kitchen of Gothic home in Hazlehurst, Mississippi with table and 4 chairs, practical sink, period oven range (1950s)

Props: saxophone case, weathered luggage circa mid-1960s, bag of pecans (some practical in shell), nylon stockings in point-of-sale packaging (1974) for each night, practical cake, antique phone, twine

Controversial topics: Suicide, infidelity, sexual relations with a minor, attempted murder, dark humor (coma).

Purchase: http://www.dramatists.com/cgi-bin/db/single.asp?key=1271

Suitable for: community theatre, summer stock, regional theatre

Awards

Nominations

  • 1982 Tony Award for Best Play
  • 1982 Tony Award, Best Featured Actress in a Play

Mia Dillon, Mary Beth Hurt

  • 1982 Tony Award, Best Direction of a Play (Melvin Bernhardt)
  • 1981 Drama Desk Award for Outstanding New Play
  • 1981 Drama Desk Award Outstanding Actress in a Play (Mary Beth Hurt)
  • 1981 Drama Desk Award Outstanding Director of a Play
  • 2002 Lucille Lortel Award, Outstanding Revival

Recent production reviews:

NY Times: http://www.nytimes.com/2008/02/15/theater/reviews/15crim.html

DC Metro Theatre Arts: http://dcmetrotheaterarts.com/2016/02/28/189881/

Backstage: https://www.backstage.com/review/crimes-of-the-heart/

Twin Cities Pioneer Press: http://www.twincities.com/2014/05/11/crimes-of-the-heart-review-guthrie-theater-does-right-by-play/

The Waverly Gallery by Kenneth Lonergan: an analysis for production

Lonergan is best known for his first theatrical success This is Our Youth (1996). Instead of the fitful travails of ill-prepared young souls making their way into the world, The Waverly Gallery showcases, Gladys Green, lawyer, activist, gallery owner and victim of dementia, who is involuntarily on her way out. Daniel Green, a speechwriter for the Environmental Protection Agency (a job once held by Lonergan) is the playwright’s stand-in and a far more sympathetic Tom Wingfield, to a far more noble Amanda:
“Long monologues that used to be part of her regular repertoire dropped out of her conversation for good. I stopped going out to dinner with her because it got to be too much or an ordeal. She rang my doorbell so much I stopped answering it all the time.”
Make no mistake; this play is regularly very funny. The first twenty times we are introduced to Gladys’ deafness, incorrigibility, and forgetfulness we find them benign and hilarious. It is the last ten times that we see how those same traits exact sadness, worry, fear and grief on her family. The tipping point is an ill-fated gallery opening for an artist of dubious talent with plates of cheese and crackers for patrons who never arrive. Then decline becomes swift and inevitable. Lonergan pulls no punches. Daniel’s closing monologue is truthful, not nostalgic:
“But I never want to forget what happened to her. I want to remember every detail, because it really happened to her, and it seems like somebody should remember it. It’s not true that if you try hard enough you’ll prevail in the end. Because so many people try so hard, and they don’t prevail.”
The playwright has unquestionable provenance. Besides This is Our Youth and Waverly Gallery, Lonergan is known for his screenplays Analyze This (1999) and The Adventures of Rocky and Bullwinkle (2000). He also contributed to the screenplay for Gangs of New York (2002). The Waverly Gallery has had well-reviewed productions in Williamstown, New York, LA, and Newton, Massachusetts.
Production requirements are all feasible for most theatrical companies. The cast is 5 (3m, 2F) with characters in their 20s, 30s ,50s and of course 80s. The tour-de-force role of Gladys needs an octogenarian of considerable talent and energy. The timing of multiple simultaneous conversations will take precise rehearsal and attention to execute. Gladys’ family (3) are New York Jews. There is no impediment (or necessity) to use other ethnicities in the additional roles. I have difficulty seeing how the multiple settings (the gallery and at least 2 apartments) are executed without detracting from the realistic simplicity of the play. Please hire a director and designer with more foresight than I currently possess. Waverly Gallery is traditionally divided into two acts. All props and costumes are contemporary. There is some vulgarity as frustration rises. Royalties are $75 per performance.
My recommendations are mixed. The playwright is an American. The setting is AGAIN regrettably New York. With America’s growing older population and the resulting crisis of care, the story will resonate with many audiences despite the locale. I can’t help but think that the inherent New York Jewish intellectual experience in which the play takes place is foreign to my audiences, and that there must be a work of similar subject and merit wherein my audiences might more readily see themselves.
http://www.samuelfrench.com/p/4859/waverly-gallery-the
Available for lending from The Princeton Public Library, Princeton, IL

The Unavoidable Disappearance of Tom Durnin by Steven Levenson: an analysis for production

Remember when greed was good? Me neither.

Sometimes our personal world disintegrates because of matters outside our control. Then there are those soul-wrenching times when our mantra should convert to “I am Vishnu.” Unfortunately, Tom the title character of Steven Levenson’s The Unavoidable Disappearance of Tom Durnin, never meditates on this reality. The result is a selfish scorched earth campaign that, if it were not for his son’s postscript of reconciliation and redemption, nearly burns the closing curtain.

After reading my second Levenson play in a week, I would not currently recommend a festival dedicated to his work. The scars of the recession are too fresh. For my own sake, my next read must be comedy. Core Values was rife with comic moments and there moments of lightness in …Disappearance…. but alas our Tom destroys those too. Tom has recently left prison after his sentence for a Ponzi scheme that sunk his firm, his friends and his family. He shows up unannounced to seek shelter in another piece of wreckage of own making, his son’s desolate one-bedroom house purchased in the aftermath of divorce. At first, we pity Tom as he tries unsuccessfully to rebuild the life he once knew, first by asking. Then he demands. Then he extorts. The world has moved on without him. We grow to see that Tom was once benign, but has become malignant. The cancer must be excised.

James: Maybe the future was unwritten and anything that came after this came of its own volition and its own accord. Nothing was fated. Nothing was preordained. I’d like to believe that. I’d like to think that was true (p 64).

As in Core Values, the dialogue is realistic, ironic, (sometimes) understated, and powerful. The pace is lively, with the same short scenes and overlapping dialogue cadence. Strong language is used more often than in Core Values with increasing desperation and vitriol as the play and Tom careen toward ruin. All language should be considered in context. Most strong language does not occur until the latter third of the play when stakes are higher. Tom is the mouthpiece for 95 percent of it. If you change his language, your audience might forgive him:

“I could kick your ass (1):” I’m in better physical shape than you are.

“Goddamn (1):” expletive for emphasis

“Oh my God (2):” I’m surprised and angry

“Fucking life (1):” expletive for emphasis

“Fucking around (1):” speaking flippantly or casually

“Fucked up (2):” made a mess of things

“You haven’t done shit (1):” you haven’t done anything

“Fuck you (2):” I don’t need your money/ I’m insulted

“I don’t need this/your shit (2):” I don’t need/want to hear about problems

“Everybody’s shit (1):” everybody else’s problems

Some production requirements for…Disappearance…. may be daunting. The cast is 5: 3 male, 2 female. No characters are race-specific, but Tom’s immediate family would be more convincing if they were racially homogenous. There are no dialects. There are 5 locations requiring much creativity and very specific set dressing: 2 residential interiors (1 sparse, 1 elegant), a classroom interior, a college exterior, and the inside of a luxury SUV. The play is divided into 18 scenes without a suggested act break. My audiences need the break. My theatres need to sell cheesecake. Running time is 1 hour and 40 minutes (NYTimes). Costumes are contemporary; characters need to convincingly represent varying economic classes from lower to upper middle class. Fee: $100 per performance.

Playwright bio: https://www.playscripts.com/playwrights/bios/1152

The Unavoidable Disappearance of Tom Durnin (had) its world premiere Off-Broadway at the Roundabout Theatre Company in June 2014.

Reviews:

“…smartly engrossing…unfolding the profound disorientation of people ruined by his decisions.”—Newsday.

“…the electricity in the room is palpable…Levenson’s dialogue is lean, dynamic and flows naturally.” —Time Out NY.

” …lays out a frank picture of an ordinary American family dealing with some clotted yet unhealed wounds of its own.” —TheaterMania.

“Harrowing…riveting theater.” —Bloomberg.com.

My considerations are mixed. The playwright is an American. The story ripped from recent headlines yet accessible to all who had a troubled family member (divorce, financial ruin, drugs, etc.) The dialogue and story are honest and raw (maybe too raw: see language above). It is implied that 2 characters routinely engage in extramarital relations. The setting is a smaller city large enough for Home Depot, Borders, Starbucks and a community college and close enough to a city that would house a financial firm large enough to make national news (but isn’t Portland, OR). It will need a crackerjack production team to execute the scene changes realistically, effectively and smoothly. Like many plays I review, The Unavoidable Disappearance of Tom Durnin and Levenson despite his provenance are unrecognizable to my core audience.

http://www.dramatists.com/cgi-bin/db/single.asp?key=4808

Available for lending from Millikin University, Decatur, IL